Gone Country
By: Pip
CATEGORY: Alternate Universe
WARNINGS: None
AUTHOR’S NOTES: This all started with an image I had in my fron of Daniel holding a shotgun (in firing position), wearing a camp baseball hat, ripped jeans, having slight stubble, and maybe a cigarette sticking out of his mouth (basically a red-neck raised SG-1 fangirl’s dream!). Told this to dvshipper and BAM, we had ourselves an AU D/V story.
AUTHOR’S WEBSITE:
http://brabbit-hole.livejournal.com/
CHAPTER 1: Morning Bickering
Bright yellow beams of sunlight shined through the large window over the kitchen sink, casting the room in the cheery light of morning.
Two men sat at kitchen table, both busying themselves with their own small tasks as they argued comfortably with each other.
"I'm tellin' ya, man..." Cameron Mitchell drawled in his fairly heavy southern accent, hands toying with a part to his '62 Mustang. He picked up the screw driver off the table, and started twisting at the metal in his other hand. Blue eyes came up. "He's not makin' it."
Jack O'Neill didn't even look away from the paper he was reading. "He'll be here." He said after swallowing down a mouthful of scalding coffee. Placing the white mug on the worn, creeky table, he turned a page.
Shaking his head,
"Doesn't matter what time he came walking-"
"More like staggering."
Jack flicked him a minute glare. "In this morning." He continued as if he'd never been interrupted. "He knows he's got work to do, and that mean's he'll be here, come hell or high water."
Laughing again,
The thump of heavy footsteps on the porch leading up to the
screen door had
Jack cleared his throat, tossing a smug smile to Cameron, before smiling sweetly at the haggard looking man now standing at the counter. "Mornin' Daniel!"
An absent hand waved his direction as Daniel busied himself with making a cup of coffee. It was obvious he was doing it all on autopilot, seeing as the dark blue baseball cap he had on was pulled down so low, it was a wonder he could see at all.
Finished with getting his coffee, Daniel brought the edge to his lips and took a deep sip. It was hot, almost painfully, but that was what he was going for. He turned around slowly, cup still to his lips, and took the few agonizing steps to the chair opposite Jack.
"Rough night?" Jack asked cheerily, voice just as loud as before. Daniel moaned, practically throwing his cup onto the table before throwing himself into the chair. He lifted up his head so he could try and glare at Jack past the brim of his hat.
"Kiss my ass." He mumbled before dropping his head into the crook of his right elbow, propped up on the table. The distinct sound of a poorly suppressed snicker had all but his middle finger go down on his right hand, directed towards the laugh's owner to his left.
It only made
Half-lidded blue eyes came into view as Daniel lifted his
head again, this time the glare directed at
"It's an annoying little prick called Cameron."
Daniel muttered around the cigarette after exhaling smoke.
"And how the hell do you know it was tequila at all?" He mumbled. It was followed by a yelp as a hand connected with the back of his head. "Hey!" Daniel shot up, glaring at the newest addition to the kitchen.
She scowled at him from the counter. "What've I told you about smokin' in my kitchen?"
Daniel met her glare with an uncaring, bleary gaze. "This ain't your kitchen, Janet."
"It is when I'm makin' breakfast in it." Janet fired back, turning to the stove where she'd already had everything set out. She didn't need to see Daniel to know he rolled his eyes in response.
Taking another drag, Daniel shot a look at Jack. "What's she doin' here?"
Jack sipped from his coffee cup, looking right at Daniel over the rim. "Didn't she just say she's makin' breakfast?"
Again, blue eyes rolled. "I mean why is she here this early in the morning?"
"I'm thinkin' that has to do with the breakfast
thing..."
He growled in response. "Dammit, I'm too hungover to deal with you two." Daniel once again dropped his head into his arm, cigarette still burning between his fingers. A gentle hand rubbed along his back several minutes later.
Janet's voice was soft and understanding in his ear. "Jack needed me to bring over some things, and I figured I'd stay and make ya'll something to eat." She was rewarded with a thankful look from Daniel as he raised his head. Her thumb brushed along his stubbly cheek. "Plus I wanted to make sure you made it home alright - you were pretty gone when you left the bar last night."
"Way gone." Daniel corrected, closing his eyes for a moment. As Janet gave his cheek one last stroke and moved off, he opened his eyes and fixed a glare on the two at the table. "'Course I'm payin' hell for it now."
The paper finally found its way to the table as Jack leaned forward. "Damn straight you are." He said in the fatherly tone only used on the two he'd taken under his wing. "Daniel, Janet tells me you were so wasted last night you could barely stand up."
A defiant smirk is all he got in return, broken only as Daniel put the cigarette to his mouth for another drag. It was followed by him sucking on his teeth with his tongue, egging Jack on. The older man just stared back, and the tension in the kitchen skyrocketed.
"Okay, before we get into this argument again..."
Daniel took the final drag from his cigarette, pinching it between his thumb and forefinger as he ground it out into the table. The action gained a headshake and an exasperated sigh from Jack, who finally looked away. "Go where?"
"Go where?"
Bloodshot blue eyes turned on him. "Well, obviously I can't remember..." Daniel mocked.
A short laugh came from across the table. "Can't imagine why."
"Okay, ya know what..." Daniel said loudly, shooting Jack a pissed off look.
Jack pushed back his chair, moving to stand up, but Janet jumped to stop the action.
"Cool it, you two." She ordered, pointing a spoon
between them. "
Again Jack went to say something, but Janet held up a finger. "Ah, ah. Don't wanna hear it..." She rolled her eyes and turned and moved back towards the stove. "I've heard it enough - Besides, where do you think he learned to party so hard anyway?"
Crossing his arms, Jack flopped back in his chair and pouted. "I wasn't that bad..."
"Ha!" Janet laughed loudly. "You were being carried out of my bar when my mama was still runnin' it." She turned and gave Jack a significant look. "As I recall, it was Daniel here who had to help you home just last week."
Daniel smiled smugly and raised his eyebrows towards Jack, who coughed indignantly.
"That's not the point here..."
Turning with a hand on her hip, Janet quirked a curious eyebrow. "I believe it is the point - these boys are only going by the lovely example you've set for them growin' up."
"Oh...right." Again, Janet was laughing. "Like your track record is any better than his." Her spoon pointed at Daniel, who just smiled momentarily as he moved to light another cigarette. She stepped over to him and smacked the back of his head again.
"Dammit Janet!" Daniel pulled off his hat, dropping it on the table as he rubbed at the spot she hit.
"No smoking-"
"In the kitchen." Daniel finished for her, still bringing the cigarette to his mouth and lighting it. He pulled in deeply, then exhaled the smoke up towards her. "Whatcha gonna do about it?"
Janet rolled her eyes and moved back over to the table. "Well, stop lettin' you into my bar for one." She picked up the skillet with a towel and scraped scrambled eggs onto three waiting plates. A disbelieving laugh came from the direction of the table and she shook her head, fighting a grin. As disrespectful as they could be sometimes, Janet couldn't help loving them.
She picked some bacon out of the other skillet, and set it alongside the eggs. Then she grabbed the plates and carried them over to the table.
"And then I'd stop makin' you breakfast." Janet finished as she set the plates down in front of them. All three guys perked up at the sight of the food, Cameron adding a laugh in response to her statement.
Janet pointed a finger at him. "You ain't much better,
boy." Her finger shifted to the pieces of metal littering the table.
"Bringin' greasy things from your junker inside is just as bad." She
took the edges of the rag on either side, picked it up, much to
"It's not a junker! And why didn't you steal his
cigarette?"
She looked at Daniel. "Cause I know he's gonna put it out any moment, ain't that right?"
Taking one last drag, Daniel sat up and nodded. "Yes Ma'am!" He beamed, again grounding out the butt into the table. He reached for his hat, placing it backwards on his head, and pulled his breakfast closer. A moment later, he was digging in with gusto.
"Oh, Janet's shining star." Cameron glowered. He dipped his fork into his eggs, sticking them into his mouth before leaning towards Daniel. "You know she only likes you more 'cause her kid's got a crush on you."
Daniel snorted around a piece of toast, looking up at Jack for a moment. The older man was hiding a smile in his coffee cup.
"Yes, well - it's an intellectual crush." He
finally said, looking at
Sticking out his tongue,
Daniel looked up at him, chewing slowly. He furrowed his brow. "You do know the hangover is still here, right? I didn't just miraculously recall what the hell you're talkin' about." He shoveled more eggs into his mouth. "'Course half the time I never know what you're talkin' 'bout."
Janet reached up and smacked him on the head again after he
swallowed. She pointed her fork at him as he pouted at her. "Don't talk
with your mouth full."
This time a snicker came from Daniel as Cameron swallowed his food loudly, looking properly chastised. Janet threw a look at Jack, letting him know it was his fault they acted the way he did. He just shrugged and continued to watch the exchange in silence.
"Hey, I don't hear no remindin' goin on here..."
Janet looked back to
"I told you about this - you've known for months
now..."
Finally, Daniel's eyes widened slightly as recognition dawned. "Right, right..." He turned back to his food, leaning over it slightly. "She's comin' into town today."
Groaning, Daniel dropped his fork. "
"What!?" Cameron dropped his own fork and glared at Daniel. "You've known this was comin' up - I reminded you last night!"
Daniel flopped back in his seat, scratching just behind his ear. "Dude, last night is all one big haze - I barely remember staggerin' home from Stoley's, let alone something you told me about pickin' up this girlfriend of yours."
"Again, you've known about this for weeks!"
Shaking his head, Daniel poked at his remaining food with
his fork. "No..." At the disbelieving look
"I know."
Daniel sighed again, this time in slight exasperation.
"
"And why is that?" Cameron asked slowly, trying to get a grip on his agitation.
Picking up his only half smoked cigarette, Daniel relit it, ignoring the sigh from Janet. He pulled his foot up onto the chair, hand holding the cigarette wrapping around his knee. "'Cause I promised Jimmy I'd take a look at that piece of shit he insists on goin' muddin' in."
"It's not just Jimmy." Daniel said, taking a drag. "I also told Jack I'd help him around here, and as much as I don't want to do yard work while i recover from my evenin' fun, I can't just blow him off."
Jack nodded a thanks to Daniel, then looked at
Shaking his head,
"Oh don't you worry 'bout that." Jack grinned as he fixed a look on Daniel.
The younger man smiled back in sarcastic cheer. "Fuckin' lovely...
CHAPTER 2: Long Time, No See
This is why he hated the big city. Nobody ever stopped to
enjoy the simplicities of life. They were always going, always needing
something high tech and fancy to do to keep themselves busy.
It was simple, it was fun, and it was home - that's all
Cameron had really ever known his entire life. Growing up with Daniel, watching
as Jack and Janet got into the same kinds of antics they now found themselves
getting into. Jack's grandma had raised them, with lots of help from Janet's
mom - sadly both had passed since, but
Of course there had been the rare occasion where
Especially if said growing boy could romp, play, cuss, and get into trouble without too much incident when he was home. Cameron had learned to loath everything about those summers with Grandma Mitchell.
Everything except a little girl with jet black pigtails.
He'd found a kindred spirit in Vala Mal Duran. She was always up for any of his
trouble-causing ideas, ideas the other kids would go running to mama about.
They'd soon become quick friends, getting themselves into more trouble than their guardians could handle. Finally, it got to the point where Grandma Mitchell had come to the conclusion that Cameron couldn't be saved, and there was no need for him to return the following summer, lest he should corrupt Vala's innocence.
The two had been eleven - it was the last time they'd ever
seen each other in person. Of course
A change from a rebellious outcast girl in a religious
If only her plane would land...
He smirked nonetheless, thinking of how he'd just up and left in Daniel's beat up Ford without permission - it was Cam's payback for his 'brother' ditching him. That, and he wasn't gonna pay for the gas burned in the trip to the airport and back. Hell, he might just find a nice scenic route home, show Vala the back country sights.
A grin graced his lips as he thought how pissed Daniel was gonna be.
"What he deserves for makin' me come here alone."
Person after unregonizable person passed through the exit,
none of them looking anything remotely like Vala.
"You lost, cowboy?!" A slightly accented voice
shouted, bringing
He stepped away from the wall. "Get over here,
you!"
"Cameron!" She squealed, drawing stares from all the other airport patrons. Even more stared as she launched herself into his waiting arms, her legs wrapping around his waist.
She giggled and pulled back. "Not that little midget
thing anymore." Vala wrapped her arms around his neck, placing a long, wet
kiss on
"Yes, well..."
Vala smiled softly, adjusting the backpack she had slung over one shoulder. "I'm hopin' it will - I'm tired of having to hide who I am from my entire world. I just want to be me - free and wild, like mama before she went and got shacked up with God."
He reached up and stroked her cheek. "Trust me, kiddo -
where we're goin', free and wild is town tradition."
* * *
*
"Do me a favor?"
Vala watched
He flicked her a glance, cursing to the stubborn stick shift under his breath. "Reach in the glove compartment there and fish out them Marlboro's."
Her eyebrow rose curiously, but Vala didn't say anything as
she opened up the glove department and rooted through the piles of papers. Just
as she connected with the box,
"Fuck yeah!" He shouted, settling back against the bench seat and pulling the truck out of the parking spot. He sped around the garage, desperate to get away from the airport and civilization.
Vala cleared her throat, and
"Right, sorry." He reached over and quickly plucked the box from her hand. Leaning forward, he rested his forearms on the steering well, using his hands to unwrap the cellophane on the box.
Grey eyes watched him with curiosity and amusement. "When'd you start smokin'?"
"And when was that?" Vala asked, relaxing back
into the seat as
He laughed again, opening the box and pulling out a
cigarette with his lips. "Ten, eleven?"
She shook her head as he held out the cigarette towards her.
"I only smoke when I drink." Vala said with a smile, shifting in her seat to stare out the window.
Vala grinned. "Speaking of this Daniel, didn't you tell me he was gonna be with you at the airport?"
An agitated look fell across
"Are you sayin' he's not here 'cause he's hungover?" Vala asked with a slightly disbelieving laugh.
Before he could continue, the cell phone he'd stashed in one
of the dash compartments started belting out Trace Adkin's 'Rough & Ready.'
"Speak of the devil..."
"Ears must be burnin'..." He said into the phone
as he exhaled blue smoke. "Hell yeah I'm telling her 'bout you!"
Vala watched her side of the exchange with interest, gauging
"That's whatcha get for blowin' me off...Hell yes I had a right to take it. Try revenge, Daniel. I'm not hurtin' your baby...Damn man, you talk 'bout this piece of crap better then you talk 'bout your women - I'm sure if you'd asked those girls, they'd say something completely different. I'm not gonna get in this argument with you again - well, cause I'm drivin' and you're still cranky from Senor Cuervo. Well, it don't sound like it's gone to me."
A smile spread across her lips as the conversation carried
on like that for several more minutes. She could see a comfortableness in her
friend that she'd never seen back in
"Yeah, whatever - you still owe me, and I'm thinkin' a
whole case this time."
Before he could hear anything else, Cameron snapped the phone shut and tossed it back in the dash compartment.
"He's gonna kick my ass when we get there." He laughed, settling back into the seat once more.
Vala grinned and looked out the front windshield. "You don't sound too upset about that."
Looking at her for a second,
CHAPTER 3: Introductions
Dust shot up from behind the worn in pickup truck as it sped
down the winding dirt road that lead to Jack's house. Windows rolled down and
the local country station cranked up loud, Vala smiled at
"Then of course there's Stoley's, place of my life
education."
Vala looked at him, hand holding tight to the handle above her head. "Nothin' like a good bar education to lead you through life."
He nodded, pulling the car to a sudden stop as a large house
loomed before them. Vala levered herself out of the window, sitting on the door
as her mouth fell open.
As he called out various 'hellos' to the house, his voice drifting back out the screen door, Vala looked around her, really noticing the property for the first time. Besides the main house, there was a pretty decent sized second house, several open acres of land covered in lush grass, and there were trees all around.
She had a feeling she was really gonna like it here.
"Well, they ain't home."
"Holy crap, cowboy." She breathed as she spun in a circle to take it all in. "This place..." Vala finally looked at him and smiled in disbelief. "Is amazing."
A loud clap, kind of like thunder but not, shattered the quiet
afternoon country side, sending birds flying up from the trees. The sound
repeated a few more times, and was followed by a distant excited shout. Vala
looked at
"Guess that answers your question."
In response, he dragged her back to the truck. "Well,
if they ain't gonna be over here..." Slamming the passenger door shut
after Vala was settled in,
Vala latched onto the handle again as
The grass quickly thinned out tremendously, patches of dirt littering the ground around them. Up ahead, Vala saw a wooden post fence in the distance, two figures standing just off the left a bit by a fallen, hollow tree carcass and its remaining stump. She pulled herself back into the truck as they both cast quick glances in the truck's direction.
Her grey eyes immediately landed on the lean, muscular man
who was taking a shotgun the other, slightly older man was handing to him.
She slowly walked around the front of the truck, watching as the young man leveled the shotgun against his shoulder. Vala breathed in deeply as she took in the sight of him, his stance clearly showing he was focused on his task.
Eyes roamed from the camo baseball hat on his head, over his stubbly cheek and cigarette hanging from his lips, down his muscular neck and tight black t-shirt covered chest. They continued down to his slender legs, hidden behind a slim fitting pair of jeans that were so worn she saw just as much tan skin as denim.
Vala was so wrapped up in him that when he finally did fire
the gun, the sound didn't even break her concentration. She didn't even notice
him nail the two beer cans sitting on the fence. It wasn't until
Daniel turned around to see her just as she looked at
He pulled the cigarette from his mouth and stood up just as
"Daniel, Vala..."
Vala gave a sort of shy smile. "Hello."
"Hi." Daniel replaced the cigarette as he held out his right hand to her. She took it, giving his hand a strong shake.
Her smile grew a little. "That was some pretty fine shootin', Daniel."
Caught up in her smile, and her voice, Daniel just grinned wider as his blue eyes stared straight into hers.
"And this..." He practically had to drag Vala away from Daniel and over towards Jack. "Is Jack."
Daniel focused on his truck, taking a long drag from his cigarette. He realized that wasn't enough to shake the intoxicating unsettled feeling just seeing Vala had set in him, and he reached down and picked up his beer bottle. Touching the edge to his lip, he drained it half dry. As he set it back down, Daniel finally turned to face the others.
Blues eyes instantly found Vala as she smiled and talked
with Jack. Daniel jumped slightly as
"Best come down before I drag you."
Daniel shifted, pulling a drag from the cigarette. "Don't know what you mean..."
A fierce blue gaze met his. "Right."
"The right way to shoot the broad side of a barn."
Daniel finally broke from his haze, grounding out the cigarette into the dirt,
as
Vala snorted lightly, watching the two men.
The predatory glint in
Daniel pointed out towards the fence. "Targets are that way, sweetheart."
As
"Think I could go next?"
He looked at her, slightly surprised. "You can shoot?"
Vala shrugged and shook her head. "No better than most..." She stepped around Jack and over to the cooler, leaning down and pulling a cold beer from the icy confines. Vala used another tree trunk to pop the top off. She turned back to surprised expressions as she took a sip.
"'Course I'm always ready to learn." She added with a grin, letting the bottle tap against her thigh.
Identical grins slowly formed on Jack and Daniel's faces. As
"She's gonna fit right in."
Daniel licked his lips and nodded. "She really is."
* * * *
The rest of the afternoon consisted of making targets of old beer cans and drinking fresh beer from bottles. The party continued over into the evening as the guys informed Vala that she wasn't a member of the town until she spent a night at Stoley's drinking, dancing, and playing pool.
Vala had gladly agreed, and now she found herself sitting at a hightop table in Stoley's bar, watching a scene that would soon become part of her everyday life.
"You're a good shot."
She turned towards the new voice, only half hearing it over the din of the bar.
"What?" Vala questioned back loudly, a smile gracing her lips as she looked at the only other person at the table with her.
Daniel leaned over the table a little, resting his right elbow on the warped surface. "I said..." He raised his voice a bit so she could hear over all the noise, a smile ghosting across his face. "You're a good shot."
Her smiled widened a little. "Thank you." Vala watched Daniel nod, his eyelids drooping a little the only sign he was just as buzzed as she was. She mimicked his position on the table, the cigarettes burning in both their hands adding smoke to the already hazy bar. "You're not bad yourself."
He grinned. "Yeah, well - I do better when I'm not recoverin' from my nighttime fun."
"Yeah,
Daniel rolled his eyes. "Run in is puttin' it lightly - I pretty much fell into Jose's arms."
She gave him a curious look as she took a puff. "Any particular reason?"
Shrugging, Daniel pulled from his cigarette too. "'Cause I had no reason not to..." He looked around the bar before turning a rueful grin on her. "As you can see, we like to have a good time around here."
Vala nodded, laughing loudly. "Yeah, I can see that." She looked out at the people, only barely remembering half of them. Of course she'd already had a few by the time they'd gotten to the bar.
"But don't let this partying fool ya..." Daniel said and it brought her eyes back to his. "Everyone 'round here does a lot of hard work, and some of them are better than family."
She shook her head. "I don't doubt it."
A silence fell between them as the song on the juke box changed over, making it marginally quieter in the bar. As the next song started up, Vala leaned back over towards Daniel.
"So why don't you catch me up on who everyone is?" She took the final drag from her cigarette, grounding it into the ashtray between them. ""Cause I'll be honest the floodin' of info that happened when I came in didn't get past the beer."
"And what's to say what I tell you will?" Daniel asked with a sly smirk, picking up his beer and taking a sip.
Vala smiled cheekily at him. "See, now the beer's settled in, and things seem to stick after that..." She looked at the table and raised her eyebrows. "Least til buzzed turns to drunk - then nothin' seems to stick."
He chuckled. "So I should tell ya now before more beer settles?"
Nodding vigorously, Vala tilted her stool forward as she crossed her arms atop the table.
Daniel sat up, pulled the final drag from his cigarette, followed her actions by rubbing it into the ashtray, then took another drink from his bottle. "Alright..." He swiveled on his stool, pointing at the person closest to him.
"Obviously ya know
"He's the town mechanic, and has taught me,
The hand that was pointing and holding a beer at the same time moved along. "That's Sam Carter." Daniel indicated the blonde who was shyly chatting up Jack. "She's the only waitress that works here, though the only people she really serves are the one-timers and..." He looked at her again, smiling smugly. "Anybody that's not us."
"'Course ya met Jack already." Again, Daniel laughed, this time as Jack practically fell off his stool. "Be glad you met him when ya did, 'cause it looks like he's gonna pull the same act I did last night."
Vala snorted a little, nodding as Daniel grinned at her.
He quickly jumped back into his introductions. "Then there's Janet, my big sister slash mother slash pain in the ass nag." Daniel blew the woman a kiss as she caught him looking at her. "She owns this bar, and...."
Vala's eyes followed the direction Daniel's hand drifted across the bar to the only child that was in the establishment.
"That devil over there is hers too." Despite the words, Vala could see the affection Daniel held for the girl in his eyes. "Though I'm sure it wouldn't take much to figure that out - Cassie is just a little clone of her mother."
Looking at the red-headed girl flipping through the selections on the jukebox, Vala tilted her head. "How old is she?"
Daniel looked at her. "Eight. Isn't she just the prettiest little girl you've ever seen?" As Vala nodded and smiled, Daniel looked back at Cassie. "She's so smart and creative... I love her like she's my own. We all do, and I think Janet is grateful for it."
"Her dad's not around?" Vala asked innocently, then blinked at the dark look that clouded Daniel's face.
He turned on his stool so he was facing the table and her. Slowly the beer bottle came to the worn surface, Daniel watching the condensation on the bottom soak into the wood. "No, her dad isn't here."
Vala shook her head. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean anything-"
"No, I know." Daniel tried to smile reassuringly, but it didn't quite reach his eyes. "It's just something we try not to talk about around here."
She nodded. "I was just curious..."
Daniel sipped his beer, then returned to twisting it against the table's surface. "Let's just say it's best we leave that conversation for another time."
Vala nodded again. "Okay."
After a slightly uncomfortable silence, Daniel let out a loud, ragged sigh and looked up at her. His lips were split in a playful grin. "Well, I think I need a shot or two to lighten things up again. You game?"
Her grin matched his. "Absolutely."
* * * *
She knew she was giggling again, but Vala also knew she wasn't going to be able to stop. That's what happened when she'd had enough to drink to make the world slightly off-kilter, but not enough to say she was drunk. And Vala had hit that hazy middle on the ride back to Daniel and Cameron's house, where she was going to be staying until she could get someplace of her own.
The cause of her giggles snorted out a laugh himself as he brought his keys close to his face for a third time. "I'll get it this time, I swear."
"Sure." Vala laughed as she shifted the bag draped over her shoulder. The rest of her stuff sat around her feet on the front porch to the house. It wasn't like she'd had much to bring, and that much was evident in the stark yellow porch light that shined down on them.
Daniel held up a key and squinted at it. "Pretty sure this is right..." He leaned in close to the lock, stumbling forward half a step as his weight shifted. He licked his lips to fight the smile as Vala giggled again, slowly sliding the key into the hole. As opposed to the prior two tries, when he turned it, the key obliged and moved with the motion.
"Ha!" Daniel laughed, turning the knob and throwing the door open with a flourish. He shot up, taking just a single step back to steady himself. "Told ya I'd get it."
She nodded in acquiescence. "You did."
His hand swept upwards. "I'd like to welcome you to your new home..." Vala grinned and stepped over her measly two duffel bags and into the house. Daniel snatched them up easily, carrying them inside behind her. "'Least 'til ya get on your feet here."
He closed the door, leaving her standing by it as he moved to turn on some lights. Vala's giggling returned slightly as his laughed out curses found their way back to her as he stumbled through the dark. She blinked as a sudden flooding of light filled the room.
"Damn, that seems brighter than usual." Daniel winced as he moved from the far end of the living room that was just off to her right across the wooden floor that separated the den from the tiled kitchen. He felt up on the inside of the small part of the wall that jutted out past the fridge and flicked on the overhead kitchen light.
Vala smiled at him as he walked back to her. "But it's got nothin' to do with the beer and the whiskey, right?"
He shook his finger at her and smiled. "I knew I was gonna like you."
Daniel picked up her bags again, and Vala followed him as he moved into the kitchen and placed the duffels on the square table. She sunk into one of the wooden chairs
"You want anything?" He asked as he took a seat at the table
She shrugged. "Whatcha got?"
Daniel threw back a laugh that sounded more than a little sarcastic. "Uh..." He drawled out as he looked around the kitchen. "I guess the real question is - what do you want?"
She dropped her backpack to the floor. "Actually, I think I'm good."
Laughing again, Daniel slouched down in his seat. "Meaning you're too tipsy to think about it." He closed his eyes slowly, dropping his head down. A soft smile played on his lips.
"Exactly." Vala agreed as she looked out at the living room, her gaze drifting to the darkened hallway the wooden path on the floor lead into. A thought occurred to her.
"So, where exactly am I sleeping tonight?"
"Mmmm..." Daniel hummed, straightening up. He reached for her bags. "Come on - I'll show you your room for the night."
Vala followed him out of the kitchen and into the hall, where he flicked on another switch, then moved down it. Near the end, on the right, Daniel pushed open a door with his back. Vala stepped in behind him, and waited as once again Daniel moved to find a light.
"Here we go..." A dim light flooded the room, and Vala looked around its confines. There was a desk littered with tons of things off to her left, and a three row bookshelf next to it, also cluttered with books and papers. Her gaze moved on to the partially open closet door, then across the far wall, where the bed jutted out towards her. It was nestled under a decent sized window, and sandwiched between two dark-brown bookshelves that reached to the ceiling and were jammed tight with stuff. A small nightstand sat just to the right side of the bed, which Daniel was swaying ever so slightly by.
She continued to take in the room, noticing a door on the wall to her right, with a tv stand next to that. On top was a decent-sized tv, and just to the right of that was a long shelf, four rows high, packed tight with movies and video games.
"I hope this is alright?" Daniel's voice drew her attention back to him. He looked uncertain, his hands held up a little. "I mean, I know it's a little messy and cluttered...."
Vala smiled. "It's fine..." She moved completely into the room, walking over to the bookshelf on the left side of the bed. She squinted at randomly placed titles as Daniel moved over to the desk and started to rifle through papers, trying to clean up a little.
"Is this your room, Daniel?"
He hesitated a little, his hands pausing in their cleaning up for a fraction. "Yeah..." Daniel nodded after a moment, turning to look at her. She wasn't sure if he leaned back against the chair purposely or stumbled into it. "Probably not what you were expecting from a redneck like me."
Vala raised an eyebrow, smirking at his obvious discomfort.
"I just...enjoy reading." Daniel rushed on, making it obvious to her that it wasn't the first time he'd had to defend the state of his room. "I mean, I like to go out and have fun, shoot guns, fix cars, get drunk and romp around, but reading is just..."
Finally, Vala decided to spare him. "It's alright, Daniel." She walked over to him and smiled reassuringly, standing on her tip toes. "I don't think there's anything wrong with a smart cowboy."
He looked down at her. "You ain't messin' with me, right? Cause I take enough shit 'bout this from most people 'round here."
"Ain't messin'." Vala smiled and walked over to sit on the bed. "Now I might give you shit 'bout not being able to sleep on this bed."
"Right!" Daniel headed for the bed, stopping by the left side to stare at the scattered papers littering the top of it. "Ummm..." He bent down, picked up one of the papers, squinted at it, then sighed. "Screw it."
The next Vala knew, Daniel was scooping up the entire bunch of papers and carrying it over to the closet. He opened the door some more, dumped the papers on the floor, then closed the closet. His smile was victorious as he leaned back against the door and smirked at her.
"Problem solved."
She smiled lethargically at him. "Very nice." Vala flopped back on the bed, her arms flung out. She laughed as the world tilted lazily. "This is all quite nice."
A short laugh had her shifting her gaze to her right. She watched as Daniel made his way to her and the bed. "You should get to sleep 'cause I'm thinkin' it's safe to say you're drunk."
"If I am, it's all ya'lls doin'." Vala pointed an accusing finger at him. "Though I contest your words."
Daniel leaned on his hands, looking at her with a grin. "Still, you need to get to sleep."
"I do."
"Then on that note, I'll say goodnight." Daniel pushed off the bed, making it almost all the way to the doorway before needing to reach out to steady himself. He looked back at Vala, who was watching him sleepily. "Welcome to the family, Vala."
She smiled and nodded. As Daniel stepped out and closed the door, Vala sat up and took in the blurry world around her. The only things from her former world sat in three rather small bags on the floor. They seemed so insignificant in comparison to the expanse of freedom that now surrounded her.
Vala slowly stripped down to just her t-shirt and panties,
sliding under the covers that held the scent of Daniel within their confines.
She sighed, smiling at herself for passing her introduction into this new world.
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